Pelican's Tale
This is a very short pixel platformer that mainly has a focus on the story.
Keyboard controls: (J) Jump, (Enter) start, (A) left, (D) right.
Made in GB studio.
Story introduction:
After all other paths were blocked, the Hummingbird and the Owl now reside in the care of the tale seeker, just as all the residents of their little town near the swamp. One of the many tales told to them is the one of the generous swamp. The swamp will give you a treasure as long as you present a gift in return. The only thing the swamp asks of its neighbours is not to disturb the swamp bed. The swamp bed is at rest.
Working in GB studio (and on these types of games) was a first for me, so I'd appreciate any feedback and constructive criticism :)
Comments
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Well I'd make it so the text doesn't repeat a bunch and music can definitely improve a game. But not bad for a first time thing, game making is quite a hard thing to do. It takes a lot of time to improve in just like any field. Can't wait to see how you improve.
Thank you so much, both for the feedback and encouragement! :D
I am currently trying to fix the dialogue issue, so hopefully that'll make gameplay a bit better. I'll also give the music thing a shot, thank you for the suggestion!